• Dawn over the Port of Brisbane
    Dawn over the Port of Brisbane
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Hi Graham,

You have asked whether or not I think this photograph is either edited. Part of me says, no! At first glance most people would not assume that you've taken two different exposures of the same image, one for the foreground and the other for the sky, and combined them together.

That being said, I don't really feel like the image is really 'talking' to me. Something I would like to have seen in this photograph is some reflection of the sky in the foreground; the sky itself is interesting but you almost need to see a hint of that golden light in the water pool to get our eyes going down and exploring that foreground. The horizon line is an interesting and I actually wish you had made more of the play of this in the photograph, rather than concentrating so much on the foreground.

As an idea, I would go back at a time when the rising tide and the sunset were both working in your favour. There is just too much distraction in those dark rocks lower down on the beach; wait until the water is covering that portion of the foreshore and have another go.

Cheers, Anthony

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