Hi Malcolm,
I like the fact that you have concentrated little more on the guitar and the music in this photograph more so than just trying to capture the performer. Sometimes as photographers we can often be too obvious in our work; in this instance though I think we can go even further with your vision.
If you look closely at the guitar you can see Aleyce’s hand reflected in the polished surface. It is for this reason that I think the photograph looks better if you crop even tighter.
In the example below I cropped the photograph ending I used Nic Software Silver Efex Pro to add a vignette and a slight tone to the image.
Good effort.
Cheers, Anthony.
Image Doctor's edited version
